Highway Blues
Monday, January 16, 2006
12:25:44 AM
The bus is ready to leave
You should pull down your sleeve
We are about to sit in cubes
To freeze in icy tubes
May I have a look at your Ticket?
F2, he says, the number of my seat
A creature, stoned, with red eyes beside
Change, I say, change my cube
I want to get iced in some other tube
Hello, I am old and ill, Cancered
I yawn at her and put on the music.
Music, the closed curtain...
The navy black sky behind
With twinkling planets and
Stars glowing in vain...
Abortive in guiding the journey...
We shall ride towards the moon
It’s copper, spreading the rays of boon
Cross, I panic, cross the ferry...
Will it be fifty minutes or fifty seconds?
Another lady, cancered still
With a smile of a dollar bill
In front, unaffected slumber and ill
Multiplying cells out in the night to kill
Am I the one I was a hundred miles after?
The fog digs the bones in
We are waiting for our grave
Hungry fingers thinkin’
Of food, as we qualify to crave
For the ticket that I ate to crumbs...

10 Comments:
just wait to hear what i do to this one!!!
ah...was this one that good????
Okay, Annie...this is good stuff. It's sad-funny, know what I mean? I mean to me...
sad-funny...nobody has pointed out this earlier...i think i am a bit sad-funny myself...
Another lady, cancered still
With a smile of a dollar bill"
---fave lines. quite sublime.
People always say big big talk but the life is very hard man
monihoy gie di dhore..............
fractured narrative.
rhythm and blues.
familiar yet distant.
a pretty snooz.
the human condition
a sorry business
sadness, confusion
a short burst
of existential devotion
how strange it be
that being alive is made ordinary ?
here on earth
with sunsets delight sensory.
the anonymous man
has got it right
life is hard
but so is poetry.
What a great thing to randomly come across! (both the original poem and the poem in response).
thanks tista
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